short stories for beginner students edited by Mr. Zaki: Two Blacksmiths
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| short stories for beginner students edited by Mr. Zaki: Two Blacksmiths |
Once upon a time, there were two blacksmiths. The first was proud and greedy but the second was modest. They were living in the same province. The greedy blacksmith was strong and rich enough to pound iron and produce a lot of tools and swords. At the same time, he was selling his products at a high price. People were upset because they encountered that high price that exceeded the limit. Suddenly, an idea struck those people to help the modest blacksmith by giving him enough money to buy a ladder, build his chimney and buy enough tools and iron to enable him to satisfy their needs. Those people knew that being charitable was more important than preaching mere abstract ideas so they decided to be the benefactor of the modest blacksmith. Soon, what they hoped for arose and the modest blacksmith prospered. In addition, he sustained them with their needs at a low price. Moreover, he decided to compensate those charitable people by selling his products for only 10 pennies. Furthermore, even the humble ones who did not have money could get what they needed. Satisfaction spread in the province and a good relationship was forged between those people and the modest blacksmith. On the other hand, the greedy blacksmith's products weren't sold, and they occupied his place in a sad way.
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